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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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ilikeskipping BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:15 am
wow this is good. ever thought of turning it into a song?
Feeling..Alone SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:42 am
this reminds me of someone [:
futureDgirl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:10 am
I also like a guy thathas brown hair.
This fits him perfectly, except the jerk part. He's actually sweet.
BrittaneyPeacock DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:33 pm
This is really good, keep up the awesome writting
LifesIllusion BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:04 pm
Really liked this. Super relatable for everyone I think. Keep up the good work! :)
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 6:22 pm
loved this one:) good job!
Desti_B said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 6:05 pm
i've read this one before and i loved it...lol..but now that i've actually talked to u i like it more lol..
wilderose121 said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:11 pm
do you read minds? i like a guy who is a jerk who has brown hair! this is amazing! pls read my song when it gets up, guys and girls!
tweetiebruce PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 5:39 pm
I can totally relate to this! :)
jessicahappy said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 12:17 pm
i know right it so true
InvisibleHeart GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 7:30 pm
I LOVE this! Very well written and honest. This brought to mind a lot of jerks that I've known. Keep writing, you're doing an excellent job :)
You are total right dude.Not all guys are jerks.But from a girls point of view sometimes the guys that aren't gerks don't take the chance to let a girl get to know them.Also girls can be dumb sometimes and yes i am dissing myself but if they are just tell them at least you can tell them told you so.
Lunalovesyew said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 5:35 pm
Omg this is fantastic!! For some reason I picture the trypical crush...taunting you with his ... you know ... jerkiness. Awesome job! I know I'm not being original, but that flowed really well!! The world needs some more simple, strong poems like this. Keep going!
vickilovesyou5 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 8:12 pm
That was really good :)
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But lovely writing, I can relate.